Okay reflection

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Today in class I read some pages of the book were reading to finish my summary paper. I didn't understand what was going on in the beginning because it started in the middle. I wrote facts from every page and put and I'm going to put them together when I start writing the summary. I wasn't feeling very chatty today so I stayed to myself. All in all class was okay.

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