Today we went over our essay. I think I could work on shortening my quote and only adding the most important bits of it. I could have definitely used better rhetorical devices to use get my point across rather than repetition. I definitely didn’t write enough to get a proper score. Instead of letting rhetorical devices come to me, I actively looked for them. I also didn’t write my paragraphs very neatly. I definitely have a lot to improve on.
Today in class I had so many questions. I'm very confused on how Mr. Rease knows everything about national and federal debt, it's crazy. We watched a video watching how small the earth is compared to the rest of the universe. We answer a prompt about the human race and the universe. The prompt was kind of difficult to understand and write about. Our reasoning for the research ethically and financially was hard to explain. All in all class was okay. :)
Today we did an assignment in class on Allusions and Analogy. I still find analogy kind of confusing because it just seems like a form of a simile. If you put on a test analogy and simile I would be very lost and confused as to which is which. I think allusion is fairly easy, its like a name drop. It's comparing people or things to well- known or people that go along with the ethics of your comparison. Besides the work, the people I worked with and I had a lot of fun.
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