Today we didn't do anything in class. Me and Mr. Rease reviewed my essay and it turns out I got a 60%. So LAME!!! I wish I did better. I had a lot of incorrect spelling and grammar mistakes. Another issue I had was explaining my evidence. I didn't go into a full explanation, I suppose. Other than that I finished the assignments that I had in other classes. I really hope I can leave this class with at least a 85%.
Today, the class was completely empty. I think there was only 5 people in class today. Me, Raevan, Jaiden, and Mia played games the whole class. I had fun, but I do wish that I took my Statistics AP exam. It really bring me down that I didn't. There is a chance that I won't use it in the future and it's not going to affect my life but another part of me is just disappointed. I have an AP exam tomorrow for history so hopefully I know what I'm doing and understand the prompts.
Today we went over our essay. I think I could work on shortening my quote and only adding the most important bits of it. I could have definitely used better rhetorical devices to use get my point across rather than repetition. I definitely didn’t write enough to get a proper score. Instead of letting rhetorical devices come to me, I actively looked for them. I also didn’t write my paragraphs very neatly. I definitely have a lot to improve on.
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