Essay reflection

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Today we went over our essay. I think I could work on shortening my quote and only adding the most important bits of it. I could have definitely used better rhetorical devices to use get my point across rather than repetition. I definitely didn’t write enough to get a proper score. Instead of letting rhetorical devices come to me, I actively looked for them. I also didn’t write my paragraphs very neatly. I definitely have a lot to improve on.

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