Today we read "More Than a Walk in The park". The passage was about a couple that decided to go on a thru-hike and loved it so much they made it part of their careers.
Today we didn't do anything in class. Me and Mr. Rease reviewed my essay and it turns out I got a 60%. So LAME!!! I wish I did better. I had a lot of incorrect spelling and grammar mistakes. Another issue I had was explaining my evidence. I didn't go into a full explanation, I suppose. Other than that I finished the assignments that I had in other classes. I really hope I can leave this class with at least a 85%.
Today, the class was completely empty. I think there was only 5 people in class today. Me, Raevan, Jaiden, and Mia played games the whole class. I had fun, but I do wish that I took my Statistics AP exam. It really bring me down that I didn't. There is a chance that I won't use it in the future and it's not going to affect my life but another part of me is just disappointed. I have an AP exam tomorrow for history so hopefully I know what I'm doing and understand the prompts.
Today we went over our essay. I think I could work on shortening my quote and only adding the most important bits of it. I could have definitely used better rhetorical devices to use get my point across rather than repetition. I definitely didn’t write enough to get a proper score. Instead of letting rhetorical devices come to me, I actively looked for them. I also didn’t write my paragraphs very neatly. I definitely have a lot to improve on.
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